The biggest problem is that much of the writing is difficult to read when it is placed on that background. How could you solve this problem? (balance).
Also, your Text Size should depend on importance. eg. 'Name' should be the largest and 'address' should be the smallest. 'details of the park' should be somewhere in between these two sizes.
Use more descriptive writing/language to persuade people to visit the park and name the attractions eg. high flyer and tumbler, green, peaceful, safe etc...
The biggest problem is that much of the writing is difficult to read when it is placed on that background. How could you solve this problem? (balance).
ReplyDeleteAlso, your Text Size should depend on importance. eg. 'Name' should be the largest and 'address' should be the smallest. 'details of the park' should be somewhere in between these two sizes.
Use more descriptive writing/language to persuade people to visit the park and name the attractions eg. high flyer and tumbler, green, peaceful, safe etc...
No logo!!! No prices, address or dates?
You need to do better Andy